Sunday, April 14, 2013

In the Boat that I Rowed..

They say that it comes,
And they say that it goes,
This feeling of dark despair;
It comes as it goes.

It bled me clean,
And it stripped my soul.
But still I suffered,
Because they said it'll go.

They said I'll be OK,
But then what did they know
How past over the horizon,
I had sailed in my boat.

Because for me it came
And then took a little too long to go.
And before I could reason,
it flew me in its flow.

But like they never tell you,
And something I'd always known,
Putting the pieces together
Does not make a whole.

Convinced by my conviction
And propelled by the flow,
I attacked my oars with vigour
To reach my sun of hope.

Way past the horizon
I chased the sun to dusk,
And having lost it to the sea
The last of my hopes felt dunked.

But like they said to me
Before I left the shore,
Happiness did come knocking
But I failed to get the door.

Enlightened by the darkness
And blinded for want of light,
I took my plunge in earnest,
And so I took my flight.

But the sun did come up
Just as they said it would,
And then it went on shining
Through the times for those who stood.

10 comments:

  1. Last stanza is very powerful !!

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  2. Never seen your poetic side,but nice job. Thumbs up!! Keep writing!

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  3. "But like they never tell you,
    And something I'd always known,
    Putting the pieces together
    Does not make a whole."

    I love that portion. It conveys so much.
    :)

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    1. Thanks Vrinda. And thanks for noticing. Incidentally everyone else read past it so I felt maybe my selection of words wasn't apt. Because these particular lines mean a lot me too! :)

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    1. Yup. That's really me. But how do you mean?

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    2. i never knew u too were a blogger...

      n ek aur baat...yr captcha code to hta de commenting system se.. comment krne k liye kr baar code bharna padta h

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    3. Well.. I'm not. At least not in the sense of the word. I just write stuff sporadically and upload what I find is good.

      And let me see about that. I don't have to enter any code so I never realised others had to!

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